Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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. I hold the view that every technological
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its pros and cons. Having education and employment accessible from
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has defeated the curse of distance from people,
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, it has its own bad sides as well. I will discuss both the perks and perils of
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new trend. Few people would contest the fact that everything has been revolutionized with the touch of technology.
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, with the sudden hit of a contagious
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the adaptation of different technologies has increased
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a considerable amount. With the
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, a huge amount of work-hour has been saved from commuting. It has
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allowed service holders to spend more time
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relaxing which is very conducive to
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in productivity. The same goes for students as well. Online education has
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enabled to increase
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number of enrolment as the
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do not have to worry about space constraints to
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it is
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undeniably true that people are getting more confined to their homes. The lifestyle of teenagers and kids
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become very sedentary compared to previous
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. Decreased physical interaction with teachers and students has affected the learning outcomes. Many employees have
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been seen taking advantage of
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perks and breaching many
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. It is needless to say that
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tech has both dark and bright side balanced
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remote work
  • telecommuting
  • work-life balance
  • environmental impact
  • socio-economic background
  • face-to-face interaction
  • interpersonal skills
  • productivity
  • reliable technology
  • quality of education
  • flexible schedule
  • cost savings
  • commuting
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