You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say : 1. What is the reason for your leaving 2. What do you plan to do 3. Where an when will you meet your friend to discuss it?

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Dear Richa, Hope you are doing well . I have a piece of great news to share with you . As you know

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in a pizza restaurant in New Delhi , but I have given my resignation letter to my manager one month prior to leaving

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, I am coming home at the beginning of next month . The first and foremost reason to terminate

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of my interest in

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, it is not related to my study field ,

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it will not be going to add any professional value to my resume . About my plans after leaving

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, I have already applied for the position of supervisor in the Green Nursery on the outskirts of our city and more importantly

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they have already selected my name for an interview in the first week of the next month because my major was in botany .

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, they were very interested in my profile . I have heard from my mother that you are coming to New Delhi the day after tomorrow. So, we will meet at my apartment because

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I have my day off on that day . To be honest , I am very eager to see you and tell you about each and everything in detail . Hoping to see you soon . Your friend, Deva

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

238 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People think that the news media has influenced people’s lives nowadays and it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people are of the opinion that long prison sentence reduces crime rate, while other believe other alternatives should be explored. Discuss birth views and give your opinion.

recently, Australian children became fat. people claim it is schools responsibility to look after children health and exercise time. To what extent do you agree or disagree??