Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation.

Artists

like many creative

people

should work hard to earn money.

However

, some of them become millionaires

while

others become poor

people

and even have

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with lack of food.

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the

government

should not help

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the artist

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.

To begin

with , the income of

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hinges on individuals who are

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in their es masterpieces.

As a consequence

,

artists

could be talented and gifted but if

people

did not like their work

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will not become wealthy and famous

people

.

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why they do not have a permanent

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artists

do not have

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monthly

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. Meanwhile , one painting could cost millions of dollars and

this

amount of money could ensure

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life. As I mentioned before everything depends on public opinion. Even, sometimes

artists

become popular and famous after their death. It is often suggested that the

government

should be responsible for

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and investment

into

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art and

artists

.

Conversely

, I disagree with

this

statement. Art is not a profitable thing.

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it cannot yield money.

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,

government

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does

not

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not have any interest to invest

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artists

.

For

this

reason ,

artists

have to try to enhance

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their

recognition by themselves.

For instance

, they can create their Instagram accounts and show their

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.

In addition

, they should take part in different exhibitions. All

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these things they need to do in order to find fans that will admire their

works

and will be ready to buy their

works

.

To sum

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,

artists

depend on public opinion and I reckon they need to adjust to it.

Also

, the

government

does not have an obligation to invest

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their

works

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. So , we cannot force

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to do it.

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mean

artists

should rely on themselves