You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates
that
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amount
of enquiries Change the quantifier
number
recieved
by Correct your spelling
received
the
tourist in 2011 through 3 different Correct article usage
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medium
(in person, by letter/email and by telephone) in a period of Fix the agreement mistake
mediums
six
months
.
Overall
the graph shows the
significant increase in enquiries submitted in person. It starts from almost 400 and reached the highest level at 1900 approximately in Correct article usage
a
six
months
. However
, the complains
submitted by Replace the word
complaints
the
letter/email have Correct article usage
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slight
decrease from approximately 750 to 700 in just 3 Correct article usage
a slight
months
(January to March) and then
a drastic change can be seen from march to may
which is 750 to 370 approximately. It Capitalize the word
May
then
remains same
in the month of Correct article usage
the same
june
The Change the capitalization
June
compalint
registers through telephone calls were 900 in Correct your spelling
company
january
. it Change the capitalization
January
then
fluctuated and reached to
1000 in Change preposition
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april
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April
qand
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and
finally
it increased to 1600 in June.
Both mediums (telephone and in person
) Add a hyphen
in-person
shows
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show
athe
significant increase in Correct your spelling
a
six
months
in the year 2011. However
, the complains
registered through the letter/email have been decreased within Replace the word
complaints
six
months
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Vocabulary: Replace the words six, months with synonyms.
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