Hosting international sporting competitions is good,but few people think this causes too many problems. Explain both views and tell your opinion.
This
line chart depicts Linking Words
unemployed
people ratio in two different countries: Correct article usage
the unemployed
United
States and Correct article usage
the United
Japan
in March from 1994 to 1999. It is clear from the graph that, Use synonyms
between
Change preposition
in
this
country a massive number of unemployed workers.Accounting to what is shown,Linking Words
to
beginning in Change preposition
apply
Japan
in the first period a tiny percentage of worker forces by 2.3.After Use synonyms
that
the rate Add a comma
,that
becom
Correct your spelling
become
becomes
increase
from 2.5 to 3.5 in three years from March . Wrong verb form
increased
Although
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drop
in 1996 ,Add an article
the drop
a drop
while
become fluctuate Linking Words
in
three years. But between March 1998 and Change preposition
over
1999
the ratio of unemployment increased sharply Add a comma
,1999
in
Change preposition
at
end
of the period. Correct article usage
the end
Change preposition
In other
Other
Change the wording
Another
country
the per cent of workers was at 7.5 throughout the three years it Fix the agreement mistake
countries
was become
from 7.0 to 5.5. After Change to the active voice
became
has become
that
the proportion drop in 1995 and 1998 was the same Add a comma
,that
levelled
in Change the form of the verb
level
Japan
. Use synonyms
To sum up
we could say that between 1998 to 1999 Linking Words
this
country had the same period of unemployment 4.5 Linking Words
the
United States Change preposition
in the
while
4.4 Linking Words
Use synonyms
Japan
Change preposition
in Japan
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite