The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the us and Japan between march 1993 and march 1999

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the us and Japan between march 1993 and march 1999
This
line chart depicts the unemployed people ratio in two different countries: the United States and
Japan
in March from 1994 to 1999. It is clear from the graph that, in
this
country a massive number of unemployed workers. Accounting to what is shown, beginning in
Japan
in the first period a tiny percentage of worker fo
rces
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races
by 2.3. After that, the rate becomes increased from 2.5 to 3.5 in three years from March .
Although
a drop in 1996 ,
while
become fluctuate over three years. But between March 1998 and ,1999 the ratio of unemployment increased sharply
at the end
of the period. In other countries the percentage of workers was 7.5 throughout the three years it has become from 7.0 to 5.5. After ,that the proportion drop in 1995 and 1998 was the same level in
Japan
.
To sum up
we could say that between 1998 to 1999
this
country had the same period of unemployment 4.5 in the United States
while
4.4 in
Japan
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  • Unemployment rate
  • Trend
  • Comparison
  • Period
  • Sharp increase/decrease
  • Correlation
  • Economic policies
  • Technological advancements
  • Global economic conditions
  • Consumer spending
  • Social welfare
  • Public sentiment
  • Predictions
  • Economic strategies
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