The graph below gives information about annual rainfall in Brazilia between 2001 and 2011

The graph below gives information about annual rainfall in Brazilia between 2001 and 2011
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The bar graph illustrates the average amount of rainfall experienced in Brazil within a decade, beginning in 2001.
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, it can be seen that the country experienced the highest
level
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of
rain
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showers at the beginning of the year. And
then
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, a steep decline in millimetres of
rain
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towards the month of June before it picks up again in September. In January, the
level
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of precipitation started with 247.4mm of water and January was considered the month with the highest
level
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of water for the whole year. Rainfall decline the following month until it reached its lowest
level
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of 8.7mm in June. A staggering difference of 238.7mm of
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showers indicates that
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is Brazil's dry season which appears to
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for a quarter of the year. The average rainfall starts to rise again in July with 11.1mm of
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until gradually increasing over the next few months before it reaches its peak of 246.0mm
at the end
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of the annum.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words level, rain, mm with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual rainfall
  • millimeters
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • anomaly
  • climatic event
  • precipitation
  • hydrological cycle
  • evaporation
  • condensation
  • meteorological data
  • arid
  • humid
  • drought
  • flood
  • sustainable water management
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