You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take
Dear
neighbors
,
I am Chadi Fakhry, the new owner of the second floor Change the spelling
neighbours
in
Change preposition
of
Sunrise
building.
I have recently received your complaint letter regarding the noise coming out of my flat. Correct article usage
the Sunrise
This
noise is due to
some renovation that must be done inside before my family move in. The apartment has leakage problems on top of some broken tiles. Using restrooms as they are is almost impossible, Moisture is always there and water is penetrating under the tiles toward the main concrete of the building thus
, potential rusting for the iron of the building's backbone.
I really apologize for the noise coming out due to
the exerted work
, I fully understand your complaint. I promise to finish the work
as fast as possible and I will shorten the work
time to be
between Ten AM and Four PM. The Unnecessary verb
apply
work
will not last
for more than 3 days. Should anyone have any more to concern
Change the verb form
concerns
about
, kindly feel free to contact me.
Yours faithfully,
Chadi FakhryCorrect pronoun usage
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite