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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

#minutes #neighbours #noise #house #apologise #action
Dear
neighbors
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neighbours
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, I am Chadi Fakhry, the new owner of the second floor
in
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of
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Sunrise
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the Sunrise
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 building. I have recently received your complaint letter regarding the noise coming out of my flat.
This
 noise is
due to
 some renovation that must be done inside before my family move in. The apartment has leakage problems on top of some broken tiles. Using restrooms as they are is almost impossible, Moisture is always there and water is penetrating under the tiles toward the main concrete of the building
thus
, potential rusting for the iron of the building's backbone. I really apologize for the noise coming out
due to
 the exerted
work
, I fully understand your complaint. I promise to finish the
work
 as fast as possible and I will shorten the
work
 time to
be
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between Ten AM and Four PM. The
work
 will not
last
 for more than 3 days. Should anyone have any more
to concern
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about
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, kindly feel free to contact me. Yours faithfully, Chadi Fakhry
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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