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The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 table illustrates the
number
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 of
employees
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 (male and female) and
factories
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 in 51 years in England and Wales.
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 male and female
employees
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 were greater in 1851 and lowest in 1901 respectively. Total
employees
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 were highest in 1861 and lowest in 1901. The total
number
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 of
factories
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were
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 greater in 1881 and lowest in 1851. Male
employees
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 were maximal in the
year
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 1851 (287,100) and
minimumal
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minimum
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 in 1901 (31,00). In the
year
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1861
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 the male
employees
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 were 1313,780.
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, in the remaining ,years the
male
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employees
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were
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increased from range 80, 123 to 6500 Female
employees
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were
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increased in
number
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 in the
year
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 1851 (190,00) and decreased in
number
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 in the
year
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 1901 (30,000). In 1861 the female
employees
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 were 160,000 and in the remaining ,years the employee ranges decreased from 60, 000 to 40,000.
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,
total
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number
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 of
employees
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were
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 greater in the
year
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 1851 (477, 100) and lowest in the
year
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 1901 (61, 000). In 1861 the total
employees
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 were 291, 780 and in rest of the
year
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 the total
employees
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 range decreases from 140, 123 to 105, 000 The
factories
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 were highest in the
year
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 1901 and lowest in 225.
This
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factories
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 increased the employee rates decreased.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, employees, factories, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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