The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

This

table illustrates the

number

of

employees

(male and female) and

factories

in 51 years in England and Wales.

Overall

male and female

employees

were greater in 1851 and lowest in 1901 respectively. Total

employees

were highest in 1861 and lowest in 1901. The total

number

of

factories

were

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greater in 1881 and lowest in 1851. Male

employees

were maximal in the

year

1851 (287,100) and

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minimum

minimal

in 1901 (31,00). In the

year

1861

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the male

employees

were 1313,780.

Furthermore

, in the remaining ,years the

male

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employees

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increased from range 80, 123 to 6500 Female

employees

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increased in

number

in the

year

1851 (190,00) and decreased in

number

in the

year

1901 (30,000). In 1861 the female

employees

were 160,000 and in the remaining ,years the employee ranges decreased from 60, 000 to 40,000.

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,

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number

of

employees

were

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greater in the

year

1851 (477, 100) and lowest in the

year

1901 (61, 000). In 1861 the total

employees

were 291, 780 and in rest of the

year

the total

employees

range decreases from 140, 123 to 105, 000 The

factories

were highest in the

year

1901 and lowest in 225.

This

shows that as the

factories

increased the employee rates decreased.