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Human activities have negative effects on the plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this question. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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population's activities have negative impacts on the
planet
Earth
 and living things. Some individuals assume that it is too late to do anything about
this
 environmental problem
while
 others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve
this
 situation. In my opinion,
this
 is not too late to take action and we still have a chance to help the
Earth
 to regenerate. Some
people
 think that there are no possibilities to save the
planet
 from pollution, and none of them tried to know why is that even happening. Folks used to live carelessly about their living places but never wanted to do something with them. I disagree with the
people
 who think helping the
planet
Earth
 is not possible because at least we should try.
For example
, most
people
 after the bombing of Japan thought that
this
 place will never be as it used to be, but after four , or five decades they admit that they were wrong.
On the other hand
, some
people
 trying to do something to help the
Earth
, and heading with some kind of challenges because it is too difficult to make it in one month or in one year. I agree with
people
 who believe that the
Earth
 would not be destroyed until we want it to be.
For instance
, in ,Australia almost half of the forests were destroyed
due to
 climate change , but
people
 came to help nature and prevented all danger. In conclusion, I believe that we still have a chance to continue to live on the
planet
Earth
, if we continue to support it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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