You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Mr/Mis. My name is Alex Lee and I work as a senior service manager in a construction equipment company. I am in charge of providing service support for all technicians and customers. I have heard a lot about your seminars, and how they could be helpful for our work, but until nowadays I had not had an opportunity to be at those seminars. Recently I have heard about a new seminar that will be provided in Spain and it still has places for applying.

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, I would like to join the next seminar and have a few questions regarding the program.

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, I would like to know about the dates that it going to be, and what programme and materials will be included in the lectures.

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, it will be nice to know a bit about an accommodation and prices. Will it be a hotel or any apartments? Who is in charge to organise the accommodation? I am looking for hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully. Alex Lee.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

168 words

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