You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Mr/Mis. My name is Alex Lee and I work as a senior service manager in a construction equipment company. I am in charge of providing service support for all technicians and customers. I have heard a lot about your seminars, and how they could be helpful for our work, but until nowadays I had not had an opportunity to be at those seminars. Recently I have heard about a new seminar that will be provided in Spain and it still has places for applying.

Therefore

, I would like to join the next seminar and have a few questions regarding the program.

Firstly

, I would like to know about the dates that it going to be, and what programme and materials will be included in the lectures.

Secondly

, it will be nice to know a bit about an accommodation and prices. Will it be a hotel or any apartments? Who is in charge to organise the accommodation? I am looking for hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully. Alex Lee.

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