The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two pie charts illustrate the proportion of regional government
expenses
in nine sectors between 2010 and 2015.
Overall
, in the first year
the most government Add a comma
,year
expenses
were in Education which has
decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
at the end
of the initial year
. Meanwhile, the least expenses
were in other expenses
sections and remain the same in both years.
According to
the data, from 2010 Education has the biggest portion of expenses
. The government allocated for
Change preposition
about for
this
program just about 24%. Whereas
, at the end
of 2015 it increased slightly became 21%. The second big percentage was Health service. The number of this
type was 21% and decrease about
1% ultimately reaching 20%. Trailed by Change preposition
by about
expenses
for Pensions in
the earliest time Authority contributed Change preposition
at
for
about 19% and remain stable until the final Change preposition
apply
year
. Followed by Defence and welfare which decrease slowly accounted
Change the verb form
to account
14
% and 13% respectively.
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for 14
On the other hand
, Interest on
borrowing was increased and spent about 10%. The other smaller percentage, which decreased steadily Change preposition
in
such
as ; Transport, Culture and leisure, and other expenses
accounted for only 3% combined at the end
of the initial year
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