A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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a large number of people in society that
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should not exploit
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, it has equal rights as
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whereas
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others believe that
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can be used for various human needs
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as food and
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. I partially agree with both views, both have their own concerns. The reason why
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should not be exploited by people is
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world is for everyone who has lived on earth regardless of whether it is human or animal.
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considered
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before we were civilized. Another supporting point is that we all know that fact is human evolution is from apes. As we are more intelligent as compared to other living being on the earth does not mean that we can kill them for our selfish reasons.
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to that, some species become endangered
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exploitation especially species which are in high demand in the market.
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, Tigers are now on the endangered list because for decades we are killing tigers to use their skin. To satisfy our needs we can use some
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to some extent.
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, poultry and cattle is the best example we can use to fulfil our hungry. As
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can take care of these species and we can re-generate as many as we want.
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, we cannot do life-threatening
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because we have strong emotions and intelligence than
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. so we can perform
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dangerous
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on
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definitely helpful for human survival.
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, killing
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should be avoided until and unless we do not have any strong reason to do so.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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