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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside the vehicles will be passenger. Do you think the advantage of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages

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It is commonly believed all types of automobiles will be self-driving in the future and only people travelling inside the robotic
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 will be passengers. From my perspective, there are myriad advantages and disadvantages of
driverless
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cars
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. One evident benefit to having robotic
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 is that it would give safer roads opportunity to individuals.
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, human drivers often bend rules and take risks, even breaking laws, but
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cars
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 will obey every rule and posted speed limit, making the roads safer for everyone. Another advantage
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 getting a
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 car does not demand driving licenses or driving tests. It means that people who have difficulties driving
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 as disabled people, older citizens, and children would be able to experience the freedom of solo car travel.
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 robotic
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 have several merits, they have undeniable demerits. One of the most noticeable disadvantages can be unemployment.
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, truckers, taxi drivers and delivery drivers will gradually lose their jobs,
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 buying of self-driving
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 increases day by day. In conclusion,
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 vehicles would bring positive effects.
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 unemployment issues may arise, I strongly believe that advantages like reduction in accidents and freedom of car travel are more significant.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomous vehicles
  • traffic congestion
  • human error
  • optimization
  • emissions
  • operational costs
  • inclusive transport
  • cybersecurity
  • ethical dilemmas
  • transition period
  • digital divide
  • manual control
  • economic impact
  • productivity gains
  • public safety
  • environmental sustainability
  • artificial intelligence
  • connectivity issues
  • transportation access
  • disruption in employment
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