You recently attended a series of English lessons in a language school. However, you were unhappy with the teaching quality. Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter: explain why you chose to study English at the school describe the problems you had with the lessons suggest how the classes could be improved

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
to express my dissatisfaction with the quality of teaching English
lessons
taken at your institute. I was promised that each concept will be explained in detail with some real-life examples and will
also
be provided with teaching material which includes all the
concepts
and practice
lessons
for each lesson.
However
, the faculty is not covering every concept and he hardly provides real-life examples to make it more understandable.
In addition
to that, the faculty is not available to clear the doubts other than class time.
Additionally
, the material does not include all the
concepts
and practice
lessons
are
also
not available for some
concepts
.
Therefore
, I request you ask the faculty to teach with real-life examples which make it very easy for students to understand. It would be better if you revise the study material and include all the
concepts
and practice
lessons
for each concept. I hope you will consider my suggestion. Yours faithfully, Kishan
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