Some people believe that parents should pay their children for doing household chores such as cleaning or washing dishes, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed by some that
children
ought to be paid for doing household
chores
by their
parents
,
as
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while
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others disagree with
this
idea. Giving some
allowances
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allowance
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to
children
for their contributions
about
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to
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the
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household
chores
may be encouraging for them. Looking
the
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discussion from the other side,
children
should help their families
for
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chores
as
a
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compulsory because they live together. On the one hand, paying
children
for their
supports
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support
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on
chores
may be beneficial for them in order to get some habits about the house works. These days, many
children
have been reluctant to do
chores
and many families have
concerned
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them
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of
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about
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‘how they will live without us?’. With
this
application
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they would be encouraged to learn these
chores
and it would be better for their future. To illustrate that,
children
can learn how to cook basic meals,
how
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and how
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to clean their gardens with some allowances
which
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paid
from
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by
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their
parents
. After they have learned well, it is proper that allowances might be decreased.
Therefore
, they would become
already
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all ready
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to
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run their lives without help
about
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with
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the
chores
.
One
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the other hand, kids should help their
parents
as
a
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necessary
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necessity
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because they live in the same house and responsibilities have to be shared. At least, they should assist their mothers and fathers in their little ages in order to raise their awareness of responsibility. Their support can reinforce their family ties and their
parents
probably reward their efforts.
For example
, mothers may give some gifts and fathers may get them to some events. In short,
children
should know that assisting their
parents
while
they are doing
chores
is a must. In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with
this
discussion.
Although
, giving some payment is beneficial for
children
’s encouragement, in my opinion,
children
should be educated about doing
chores
by their
parents
as
a
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compulsory work in
the
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families.
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