The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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map illustrates the development of the village of Ryemouth in 1995 and the present. It is clear from the graph that, several things have changed and developed into modern things.
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Firstly
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According to
what is shown, at present, the housing area on the northern side has expanded more than it in 1995. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the farmland and forest park Linking Words
in
1995 were merged and turned into a golf and tennis area.
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Secondly
, they added a new side road on the west Linking Words
moreover
connecting with residential units Linking Words
along with
the man rode on the eastern side the hotel remained Linking Words
while
they built a car parking on the opposite part of the shops replaced with restaurants .
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Finally
, in the south part of the village apartments have been demolished and converted into a fish market Linking Words
in addition
to selling Linking Words
it
after catching the fish from the newly constructed fishing port .
In conclusion, we can say that the village has utilized the building in a better way .Correct pronoun usage
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