The diagram shows how apple is canned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant. Write at elast 150 words.
This
diagram illustrates the way of apple canning. It is clear from the graph that, there are 14 steps in the process in order to can the apple.
Firstly
, according to
what is shown, at the beginning of the process, they select the apples by them self and then
they put them in a truck to deliver them to the factory to start the main procedure.
Secondly
, after that comes
the third step which is washing Add the preposition
tocomes
then
the quality check and putting it in cold storage where the temperature is low.
Thirdly
, it is weighing and grading time moreover
, they peril it and cut it into slices which are easier to put in cans furthermore
, canning and then
cooking and sterilization where they use polling to the apple.
Finally
, the labelling in addition
to the storage and in order to dispatch it which is the last
phase of the process.Submitted by smmoe289 on
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