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Some people think that all university students sould study whatever they like. Others believe that they shoyld only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

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There are some disagreements about which curriculum should be taught by universities. Some people believe it is better for
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 to be forced into certain subject areas. Some others, including me, believe that
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 should be able to study the course of their choice.
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 as science and technology to be part of the
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 curriculum could be advantageous for
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 in the
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 , because those
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 may provide more job opportunities, career progression, and better salaries.
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,
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 may experience improved economic outcomes.
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, on the societal level, by forcing
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 to choose particular
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subjects
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, society may experience some gaps in other
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, like art, history, and language, which can have some negative effects on the economy.
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,
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 should be free to choose
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subjects
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, which may make them passionate about what they are learning.
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, society may benefit more, as those passionate
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 can make a significant contribution to society by using their talents, skills, and enthusiasm to make positive changes in their communities.
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, nobody can really predict which
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 will be more useful in the
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 because there are many factors that can contribute to defining a subject as effective in the
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, like demand and population growth. In conclusion, I believe that it is wise to give
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 a choice to select their
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subjects
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instead
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 of forcing them to study definite
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. Because
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 can increase their passion, and
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 their favourite
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 may be more effective in the
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 than the compulsory
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.
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