The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The bar chart gave information about the
proportion
of households
in owned and people
rented
housing in two countries, namely England and Wales over a period of 94 years, starting from 1918 to 2011.
Correct pronoun usage
who rented
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage
of people
owning housing was
slightly decreased year by year. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, the opposite was true for households
in rented accommodation . Also
, the figure for people
owned
housing was similar compared to the rate of Correct pronoun usage
who owned
people
rented
housing.
The Correct pronoun usage
who rented
proportion
of households
in owned housing decreased slightly from 76% to 68% in the first 21 years. The percentage
of people
who owned housing was highest in 1918, the opposite was true for the rate of people
who rented housing. The proportion
of households
in owned accommodation witnessed a stable trend of 68% between 1939 and 1953. That was a considerable fall of about 40%. The figure was similar to the rate of people
who rented housing in 1971. The percentage
of people
who owned housing was a slight decrease of
about 5% from 2001 to 2011.
The Change preposition
by
percentage
of households
in rented housing slightly decreased by about 10%. That was a stable trend of more than 65% between 1939 and 1953. The figure was a sharp increase of nearly 40% over a period of 63 years starting from 1939 to 2001. There was a marginal fall by
approximately 5% from 2001 to 2011. The Change preposition
of
proportion
of people
who rented was highest in 2001, in contrast
to rented housing was rented .Submitted by hoailinhvu0504 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, households, people, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 4 times.
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