the table below shows the daily oil in from 2000 to 2004
The table chart reveals the fossil fuel production of four distinct countries namely
Nigeria
, Cha, Congo, Use synonyms
Somalia
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and Somalia
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period, commencing 2000.
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, it can clearly be seen that Chad has not entered the race but Linking Words
then
the nation started to produce oil Linking Words
since
2003 with a low level of production. Another notable point is that whilst Congo held the crown at Change preposition
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first
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Nigeria
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year
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Look at the chart in more detail, 205k barrels belonged to Use synonyms
Nigeria
in the Use synonyms
first
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year
, followed by a gradual rise to 210k in the next Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
In contrast
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year
of Congo underwent a significant fall Use synonyms
by
41k from 275k barrels, followed by a steady downward trend to 203k in 2004. The daily oil production of Change preposition
of
Nigeria
experienced a dramatic decline to 190k in 2002 before rising back to 210k and 213k in 2003 and 2004 respectively.
Starting at 5k per day in 2000, followed by a steady rise to 8k in the next Use synonyms
year
. The number of Somalia increased considerably to 17k in 2002, which doubled that of 2001. Meanwhile, Chad did not produce any barrels until 2003, the number started at 8k per day, which is 6 times lower than that of Chad in 2004. Use synonyms
Similarly
, Somalia underwent a significant growth to 21k and 50k in 2003 and 2004 Linking Words
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