OUR ASSIGNMENT👇: You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: 1) Explain when and how long you will be in town. 2) Ask whether you can stay at their home. 3)Offer to pay for yourself.

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Dear Riddhi, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am planning to visit Ahmedabad next week. I will stay in Ahmedabad from 24th January to 28th January for the induction program organised by the college I am studying

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Unfortunately, they are not providing accommodation for

this

short duration.

Additionally

, I tried to search for a hotel but all are booked for

this

period and

hence

, I am asking you whether I can stay with you at your home for the duration I mentioned earlier. The college is not far from where you are currently living and mostly I will be in the college during day time.

Moreover

, I would like to pay for myself for expenses incur during

this

period, I do not mean to offend you with

this

but I want to be independent as early as possible. Please let me know in case I cannot stay at your home. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours lovingly, Kishan

Submitted by kishanpatel2550 on Sun Mar 05 2023

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Overall Band Score

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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162 words

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