some people beleive that when designing a building, the most important thing to be considered is the function rather than the outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In the present world, building structure becomes the most controversial
while
outward
appearance is Add an article
the outward
ignoring
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ignored
due to
many reasons. It is agreed that building should be well functioned
. Increasing the population will make the limited Change to the active voice
well function
have well functioned
space
as well as
eco friendly
building Add a hyphen
eco-friendly
structure
will prove Fix the agreement mistake
structures
this
argument.
To begin
, High
population is struggling with small Correct article usage
the High
space
. Therefore
, most of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
are trying to get benefits
from Add an article
the well
a well
well structured
Add a hyphen
well-structured
building
. Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
For instance
, Malaysia builds residential homes for people
those
who are living in the city side. It helps Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
many Change preposition
apply
people
to live in the same space
effectively.
Furthermore
, most of the building structures are creating to
Change preposition
apply
unfriendly
Add an article
an unfriendly
the unfriendly
method
for Fix the agreement mistake
methods
environment
. Correct article usage
the environment
People
are only thinking about the
appearance. So, Correct article usage
apply
it
Change the pronoun
its
effects
Correct your spelling
affects
on
the Change preposition
apply
environments
badly. As an example, recently turkey gets Fix the agreement mistake
environment
the
huge earthquake and they have loosed lives more than 20000 Correct article usage
a
of
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apply
people
due to
bad building structure
Fix the agreement mistake
structures
which
created without thinking environment. Some Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
build by destroying the rainforest and the rives
for looking. It will make the road to Correct your spelling
rivers
Correct article usage
the extinctions
extinctions
of human and animal lives. Every Fix the agreement mistake
extinction
space
, we should use Correct pronoun usage
it usefully
usefully
Change the word
useful
instead
of destroying the space
.
In conclusion, effective
building will give Add an article
the effective
benefits
for environment
Add an article
the environment
as well as
human
. Fix the agreement mistake
humans
Also
, human
can manage their valuable limited Add an article
a human
the human
space
with high benefits
. However
, every country should apply rules for construction
field. Add an article
the construction
Then
people
will focus on the
Correct article usage
apply
environmental
friendly building structures and It will give more Change the adjective
environmentally
benefits
to the world.Submitted by uddeepa.eashani96 on
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