The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The bar graph gives information about how much consumers spent on different 5 things (cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras) in
France
and
UK
in the year 2010 .The units are measured in pound sterling.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the government in the
UK
spent more on cars, books and cameras than in
France
over the period shown.
However
, considering computers and perfume,
France
took the lead in these categories. In 2010,
France
spent on cars 400000,
while
the
UK
took the first position with about 465000. The expenditure on books was 300000 and just more than 400000 in
France
and the
UK
, respectively.
Furthermore
, the
UK
invested (about 350000) more than twice as high as
France
.
On the other hand
, when it comes to the computer category,
France
spent (approximately 370000) higher 20000 than the
UK
.
Moreover
, the expenditure on perfume in
France
made up 200000,
while
the
UK
spent a bit less.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words france, uk with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • consumer goods
  • chart
  • countries
  • overall
  • compare
  • analyze
  • categories
  • consumer spending
  • trends
  • proportions
  • statistics
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • notable
  • remarkable
  • substantial
  • considerable
  • determine
  • conclude
  • in conclusion
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