The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The Flowchart shows the steps
how
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of how
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the
bricks
are made for the building industry.
Overall
, there are 7 steps and it begins with the digger machine
to collocate
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the clay and
end
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ends
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with the delivery process. The first step
to
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is to
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dig
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the clay
by
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with
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the help of the digger and put the clay
to
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on
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the metal grid roller to roll and
then
mix sand plus water to make a paste.
This
paste
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is use
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use
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used
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to
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two
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ways, one is
wire
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a wire
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cutter
or
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and
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another way is mould to
made
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the
bricks
in shape. After toward, the
bricks
need to be
putted
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put
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in the dying oven for 24-48 hours which is almost 2 days. The process continues with the
bricks
being fried in the kiln at
the
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a
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moderate temperature of 200 to 980 Celsius degree. After that, they are heated under
the
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a
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higher temperature of up
1300
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to 1300
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Celsius degree before being cooled for 2 or 3 days. In the next and very
last
stage
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stages
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, the
bricks
are packaged. The whole process concludes with the delivery of the
bricks
to the customers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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