Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue their work. To what extent do you agree?

It is undeniable fact that recently

artists

get unsatisfactory salaries. Some people assume that the

governement

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government

should take a role to pay the

artists

. The writer completely agrees with

this

statement

due to

their effort and the

duration

of the nation. To commence with, the government’s crucial role is to develop the prosperity of

the

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society. One of the actions that

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preferrable

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is

increase

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the salary of

artists

who have low annual income or underground economic.

According to

this

, the artist will create the

arts

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art

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with high-quality

equipments

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equipment

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and materials, which results in the best product of

arts

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.

For instance

,

the

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artists

in the United States create the most enormous statues in the world owing to the funds of

government

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the government

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. Because of

this

, the country will be known and many tourists visit the nation, which increase the country’s income. Another point to consider is the

duration

of the work of the

artists

. These days, a lot of

artists

should make products using recent technologies. Unfortunately, some

artists

can not afford it

due to

lack

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of money.

This

contributes to

long

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duration

of work, unskilled and demotivated of the artist. To illustrate

this

, if the artmaker is unmotivated to create several products, they will be unemployed, which

spike

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the number of

unemployment

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and poverty in the nation.

Thus

, the country spends more money

for

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social funding and

dip

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the income of the state.

To sum up

, the writer totally agrees to expand the funds of

artists

because of the

marvelous

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action and

duration

of the country.