The chart below show the percentage of students joining North West University

The chart below show the percentage  of students joining North West University
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The pie diagrams illustrate the number of students who entered
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University.
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,the first
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demonstrates per cent of students by faculty,
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the second one shows per cent of students from different countries.
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it is clear that
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the leader is the "Arts"
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with 23%,
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, it only differs by 1% with the "Computing" part.
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also
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has a number higher of 1% than the "Science"
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.Other parts of the diagram are less than 15%.The most significant of them is the "Business" aspect which has 14%."Engineering","Medicine", and "Law" sections are unremarkable and together have 20%.
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has more significant aspects.It is seen easily,that the total leader of the
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is "South American" which has 79%.
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other parts barely have some per cents,except the "European"
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which is in second place with 21%.The total outsider of the two charts is the "African"
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which only has 2%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, section with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrollment
  • demographics
  • percentages
  • academic year
  • trends
  • gender distribution
  • faculties
  • departments
  • domestic
  • international
  • academic disciplines
  • economic conditions
  • scholarship
  • reputation
  • growth
  • parity
  • data analysis
  • popularity
  • external factors
  • predictive modeling
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