The table below gives information about student enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about student enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below gives information about student enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the
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of students registered at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008.
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, it can be seen that student enrolments increase dramatically over the years, all started with only 218 people but in 2008
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number
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increased reached almost 6,400. The percentage of them came from overseas rose
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and the
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figure accounted for 28%
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of the 5% accounted for in 1928. A more widely look, reveals that the
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of females presented in the University rose
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respect the initial situation, but in 1958
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fell to 32%,
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10% lower than in 1928.
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the
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of males increases between 1928 and 1958, it drop off to 46% in 2008. It is
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clear that a lower amount of students came from near Bristol, and
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the table,
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data represents the greatest drop.
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, always more people came from other countries over the years.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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