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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language

#english #language #country
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Mastering a
language
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 in a
country
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 where it is widely spoken has many positive sides. It is
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therefore
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, a good idea to study
English
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 in a
country
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such
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 as Britain, I believe it is not the only way to learn the
language
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.
Firstly
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, more
students
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 in
non
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non-English-speaking
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English
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-speaking countries master
English
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 at secondary school, and sometimes at university these days. Though
,
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 their spoken
English
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 is not usually of a very high standard, their base of grammar is quite advanced.
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 is certainly useful when
students
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 come to an
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 -speaking
country
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 to perfect the
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.
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, studying the essence of
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 at secondary school is less stressful than mastering the
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while
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 overseas.
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 is because
students
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 living at home do not worry about difficulties
such
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 as finding
accomodation
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accommodation
, paying for their
study
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studies
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 and living costs and trying to find survival in a foreign
country
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 where
day by day
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day-by-day
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 living might cause much stress.
On the other hand
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, there are definite advantages
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 learning
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 in a foreign
country
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. Every day there are opportunities to practice listening to and speaking with foreign people.
In addition
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,
students
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 could experience the culture firsthand, which is a great help when trying to grasp the
language
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.
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 is especially true if they choose to live with a foreign family, as exchange
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for instance
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. All in all, even though it is preferable to study
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 in an
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-speaking
country
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, a reasonable level of
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 can be achieved, if a student is gifted and dedicated.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersion
  • fluency
  • advanced
  • communicate
  • accommodate
  • exposure
  • cultural understanding
  • native speakers
  • educational institutions
  • resources
  • diverse
  • globalized
  • interact
  • self-study
  • online courses
  • tutors
  • language exchange
  • books
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • conversation partners
  • progress
  • motivated
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