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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language

#english #language #country
Mastering a
language
 in a
country
 where it is widely spoken has many positive sides. It is
therefore
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, a good idea to study
English
 in a
country
such
 as Britain, I believe it is not the only way to learn the
language
.
Firstly
, more
students
 in
non
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non-English-speaking
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English
-speaking countries master
English
 at secondary school, and sometimes at university these days. Though
,
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 their spoken
English
 is not usually of a very high standard, their base of grammar is quite advanced.
This
 is certainly useful when
students
 come to an
English
 -speaking
country
 to perfect the
language
.
Secondly
, studying the essence of
English
 at secondary school is less stressful than mastering the
language
while
 overseas.
This
 is because
students
 living at home do not worry about difficulties
such
 as finding
accomodation
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accommodation
, paying for their
study
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studies
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 and living costs and trying to find survival in a foreign
country
 where
day by day
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 living might cause much stress.
On the other hand
, there are definite advantages
of
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 learning
English
 in a foreign
country
. Every day there are opportunities to practice listening to and speaking with foreign people.
In addition
,
students
 could experience the culture firsthand, which is a great help when trying to grasp the
language
.
This
 is especially true if they choose to live with a foreign family, as exchange
students
for instance
. All in all, even though it is preferable to study
English
 in an
English
-speaking
country
, a reasonable level of
English
 can be achieved, if a student is gifted and dedicated.
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  • immersion
  • fluency
  • advanced
  • communicate
  • accommodate
  • exposure
  • cultural understanding
  • native speakers
  • educational institutions
  • resources
  • diverse
  • globalized
  • interact
  • self-study
  • online courses
  • tutors
  • language exchange
  • books
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • conversation partners
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  • motivated
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