you are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. you would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter. . ask about the school . say what kind of accommodation you want . mention any special requests you have (for example diet)

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
I'
m
writing
this
letter to tell you that I want to enrol on studying English courses at your school.I would like to get some information about your English courses.
First,
I would be appreciated it if you send me a location I'
m
wondering to know , is there any offer to transport me to school or not.
Secondly
, I need to know how much I have to pay for every course. I would like to explain to you that I prefer to have a dormitory close to the school because I don't have a car and I prefer to have an international roommate .
In addition
, I don't have staff and I need to rent a furnished room. I really thankful if you consider a self-service for me because I'
m
not an expert in cooking. So I need to spend a lot of time making food and it doesn't makes sense. I'
m
looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best Regards, Sara
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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