The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

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changes the village named Reymouth

undergone

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from 1995 to now.

Overall

, a comparison of

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maps reveals that a lot of changes occurred in these 29 years. Major developments are the construction of tennis courts, golf club, restaurants and apartments. Analyzing the graph, it can be clearly seen that,

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farmland was close to what used to be a forest park in 1995, situated to the north of the hotel is now converted into a golf club. The forest near

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is removed and replaced with a new tennis court.

However

, a new car parking lot is set up next to the hotel.

Moreover

, some houses were

also

built in the housing area.

Furthermore

, the shops south of the housing area were demolished and replaced with restaurants. The apartments had been constructed by knocking down the fish market to the west of the cafe. With the flow of time, the fishing port in the sea

is vanished

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

164 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Urban development
Infrastructure
Residential area
Commercial district
Public amenities
Greenery
Renovation
Expansion
Demolition
Construction
Accessibility
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Urbanization
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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter. • describe the situation • explain how you were helped • state what you are going to do as a result of this good experience

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