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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the different proportions of global
forests
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 that exist in 5 regions of South
America
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,
Africa
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, Asia, Europe, and North
America
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. The amount of
the
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timer in those regions
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 shown in another chart.
While
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Africa
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 has the largest proportion of
forests
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 in the world, North
America
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 produces more timber than any other part of the world.
Africa
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 and North
America
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 dominantly possess
forests
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. The largest
forests
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 belong to
Africa
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 with 27%, followed by North
America
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 which owns 25% of the global
forests
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. Europe comes third with 18%
whereas
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 30% originated in
Africa
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 and Asia with 16% and 14% respectively. It is interesting that the proportion of timers does not necessarily follow the same pattern as the first chart. Half of
timers
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the timers
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 in the world
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 produced in North
America
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 and Europe with 30% and 20% respectively.
Africa
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 is the second largest region to produce timber. Asia has twice as many timbers as
Africa
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 which produces the least amount with 9%.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words forests, america, africa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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