The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
The table represents the percentages of secondary school
students
attending 4 different kinds of secondary schools
between 2000 and 2009.
Overall
, the highest percentage of pupils attending a type of secondary school was in 2009, 58% of students
attended community schools
. On the other hand
, the lowest was also
in 2009, which was 10% of secondary students
in specialist institutes.
First of all, attendance at specialist schools
didn't change much throughout the years 2000, 2005, and 2009, it was 12%, 11%, and 10% respectively. However
, community schools
' attendance changed a lot, from 12% in 2000 to 58% in 2009.
In terms of grammar schools
, students
' attendance decreased between the years 2000 and 2009. In 2000 it was 24%, whereas
in 2009 it went down to half of that. Lastly
, voluntary-controlled schools
were generally the most attended schools
in comparison with the others. Half of the students
in 2000 attended voluntary-controlled schools
, but it then
dropped to 38% in 2005 and 20% in 2009.Submitted by m.aburamyah on
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