the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea
The diagram gives details about different methods of black
tea
production.
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Overall
, there are two different ways of black Linking Words
tea
manufacturing (traditional and modern), both beginning with leaves picking and ending up with leaves drying.
First of all, workers pick two top leaves for a good quality drink. Use synonyms
Following
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this
, the leaves are placed on the rack and go through withered by air pathing through, which takes away 60% of moisture. Linking Words
Next,
to make the loose type of Linking Words
tea
, leaves are rolled flat and broken and, Use synonyms
as a result
, release enzymes, Linking Words
whereas
for making Linking Words
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bags, they are cut, torn and curled to make smaller granular pieces.
After that, both types of products undergo fermentation by being spread on tiles or cement, where enzymes and air change Use synonyms
tea
colour into copper. Use synonyms
Then
, leaves proceed to drying by hot air or firing in the oven. Linking Words
Subsequently
, 97% of remained moisture is out Linking Words
together with
flavour and aroma being released.Linking Words
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