The maps below show how a coastal town developed between 1950 and 2007.
The picture illustrates
previous
landscape of a coastal Add an article
the previous
town
in 1950 and its development after 57 years.
Overall
, there are major changes happened in the coastal area over a 5 decade
.
The coastal Fix the agreement mistake
decades
town
's west and east
side was mostly surrounded by Add an article
the east
greenlands
in 1950. Change the capitalization
Greenlands
However
, this
was changed in 2007, wherein commercial businesses such
as cinema
and shops were erected. Houses were Fix the agreement mistake
cinemas
also
built on the southeastern portion of the town
and small driveways were constructed.
In 1950, the car park was located in
the southeastern side and transferred to the left outermost part of the field in 2007. In the same way, a swimming pool was added and a multi-storey car park was built. After 50 years, rental apartments were established on the northern side of the Change preposition
on
town
proper and an additional marina port was formed for docking yacht
.Fix the agreement mistake
yachts
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