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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantagesof exams as a form of assessment?

#trend #students #exams #disadvantagesof #form
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exams
, some
people's
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exams
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students
 should attend the
exams
. If they attend the
exams
 they are developing
there
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 confidence and
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there
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 confidence.
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 are attending the NEET exam there is graded and
student
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 have to improve
there
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 study level. They have more developing capability to
conducting
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 the
exams
.
some how
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grading
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there
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other
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exams
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Students
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students
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students
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the students
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they
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are to much
stress
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for
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exams
 and they cannot tolerate
there
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level
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.if only accepting the
assessments
 they are free from the
exams
. If some
students
attending
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higher studies there
is
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 no
exams
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students
. In conclusion in more
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benefit
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 for the
students
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 some disadvantages for the
students
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effect
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 of more anxiety. If there are attending the exam more stress for the
students
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