There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?
Emigration become a widespread phenomenon, where for some it is an opportunity to live in better conditions and for others a necessity. Despite drawbacks, which will be described later in
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essay, I believe that it is a basic human right to live whenever they want to, which inevitably will be beneficial for both, Linking Words
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For instance
, in Canada, there is a system of providing citizenship for different specialists, which helps to maintain a normal workload.
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as the process of adaptation to a new environment and discrimination. Both of these reasons can lead to serious implications, especially with mental health. Another significant drawback is that Linking Words
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which are considered to be less appealing to live in, lose their staff which leads to slower development of their economy and culture. Use synonyms
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decision outweigh all possible negative consequences, people can have high-paid jobs, a safe environment to live in and an opportunity to mature.
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To conclude
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different reasons. A basic human right is to choose where they want to live , so it could not be restricted, Linking Words
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where they choose to live as well.Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...