Nowadays, various types of crimes are done by youngsters all over the world and that have increased significantly. In this essay, I will discuss the Issues of why youngsters are interested to do crimes and give them appropriate solutions to this problem.
It is not uncommon to hear the complaint that youth created a variety of
crimes
around the world and have improved strongly. The factors responsible for the problem and feasible solutions accordingly
will be analyzed in this
report.
The main reason is that teenagers
do not be educated well in school and at home. In other words
, they must lose their education that
they do not have the awareness of controlling their behaviours. Maybe they do not have a rich family and support them to go to school so Correct word choice
because
that
youth want to get money or kill time by doing Correct determiner usage
the
crimes
. In addition
, It is necessary for parents
to focus on their children's feeling
. Family members are too busy to teach them the bad influence of Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
crimes
and accompany their children causes
youngsters Wrong verb form
causing
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to have
have
to get attention from their Unnecessary verb
apply
parents
through
doing Change preposition
by
crimes
. Another is called imitating, when teenagers
touch too much
things about violence and Change the quantifier
many
crimes
, they must have excitement to imitate the same behaviour and show their power and ability. Finally
, the
curiosity Correct article usage
apply
need
to be one of Change the verb form
needs
reasons
why youngsters are interested in doing Add an article
the reasons
crimes
. They are naive and can not judge the problems and just follow their hearts.
However
, there are various steps could
tackle Correct pronoun usage
that could
these problem
. First and foremost, governments should regulate Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
the
strong laws to Correct article usage
apply
limited
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limit
teenagers
' behaviour. Amending some punishments, such
as prison, money and the most important thing is letting them to
be educated under their supervision. Change the verb form
apply
Besides
, banning violent things, like films, books, TV shows and so on. Finally
, parents
should spend time to accompany
their kids Change the verb form
accompanying
teach
them what need to do and what things are not Correct word choice
and teach
be
allowed. It must benefit Unnecessary verb
apply
to
their children to improve their life.
In conclusion, governments and Change preposition
apply
parents
could certainly implement a range of measures to reduce the interests
of Fix the agreement mistake
interest
teenagers
to do Add an article
the crime
crime
.Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
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