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discuss the process of manufacturing instant noodles

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As demonstrated by the diagram above, the production line process of instant noodles is comprised of broadly 4 steps, which are preparation of ingredients, implementation of the dough, disc-forming and cooking, and cup encasing.
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 with, adequate flour transported by tanker trucks is converted into storage silos by pipe in order to ensure it won't get wet or even mouldy. Later, the flour will be delivered to a mixer in the factory workshop and mixed with water and oil. After thoroughly blended and compacted with several rollers, flour turns into a dough sheet and is instantly cut into strips as the conveyor belt moves.
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, multiple lines of strips will be automatically rolled as discs just the same shape as commonplace in daily life, though they are still raw and need to deep-fry in oil and dry to edible.
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, crispy instant noodles discs will be encased into cups with vegetables and spices. In the end, before selling in the market, these cups are required to be labelled and sealed, which is so-called brand packaging with necessary information recorded.
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