The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates the major transformation that happened in one particular village in Ryemouth from 1995 to the present period.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that more buildings and housing had been built,
however
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, the main road nearly remained unchanged. In 1995, there was farmland and a forested area in the northern part of the village with residential areas across the streets. At the same time, there were shops on the west side of the road and a hotel on the eastern portion of the town. A fishing harbour port in the northern area is erected alongside the fish market and cafe shop. Currently, the Greenland areas and forest park were developed into a recreational field for golf and tennis. An increase in the number of houses built was
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noted on each side of the road.
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a driveway extension was done to make way for the new houses built. The shopping centres were removed and changed to restaurants. Beside the hotel, a carport was made
while
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the cafe was unmodified. Another transformation was made when the fishing port and market were eliminated to give way to the building of four apartments.
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