In the future, nobody will buy printed nespapers and books because thay will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

the current generation can access everything online ,
such
as education, buy online, keep in touch, and read electronic
newspapers
and
magazines
, so some believe that nobody won't pay to buy printed
newspapers
or
magazines
. I partially agree with it. Reading
books
or
magazines
is a favourite work of some
people
. they read
books
or
newspapers
every day and are aware of
news
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in
this
way. in recent years online
books
or
magazines
develop worldwide and many
people
tend to use them
instead
of printed
books
. be available is one reason because you can access many
books
or
magazines
or
newspapers
, just by clicking on a website. it's really easy for each person who reads them. in each city or village, you can read any
newspapers
or
books
which you like and
also
download them in a short time.
moreover
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it
be
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easy to archive online
books
or
newspapers
or
magazines
is another reason that
people
tend to use
this
method. in comparison to printed
books
and
newspapers
and
magazines
, the archive of online
books
or
newspapers
are
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extremely easy. they are stored
in
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a small CD or flash drive. in ,
fact
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we can store a large volume of them on a CD , as a
,
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result we can quickly access previous content and
also
it takes up little space to compare printed
newspapers
and
books
which occupy an enormous space. for ,
instance
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I had read mehrnameh magazine for ten years and had decided to keep all of them but it would occupy all of my room space ,
therefore
I Member to its website , paid money and download all of them and now on my ,computer I have all versions of
this
magazines
without they're occupying any physical volume. on the other ,hand some
people
have difficulty reading electronic
newspapers
or
books
because they should stare at a monitor for hours and it causes they
complain
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of eye strain and blurred vision , in ,addition staring at the monitor irritated their eyes. so they like to read printed
newspapers
and
magazines
or
books
in place of online
books
. for ,example my uncle has eye strain and concentrating on a screen is too troublesome for him
as a consequence
he read printed
books
.
to sum up
,
however
staring at a monitor is difficult but I personally believe that to be available and to be easy for archive cause that many
people
won't read printed
books
or
newspapers
in the future so I partially agree with
this
issue.
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