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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above pie chart illustrates global natural habitats in five different continents namely Asia, Africa, South
America
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, North
America
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 and Europe. Comparing the percentage value with world forests, 27% in the African region dominates all other continents
while
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 25% in North
America
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 and ranges between 20 to 10% in ranking order as South
America
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 with 18%, Europe having 16%
while
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 Asia has 14%.
Timber
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 is a rare wood found on our globe. 30% of
timber
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 is found in North
America
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 which is the highest,
secondly
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 South
America
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 having 23% and afterwards 20% in Europe. Regions having the lowest
timber
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 would be Asia which has 18% of
Timber
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 and 9% in the African region.
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 in both pie charts, North
America
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 is full of world forests and
timber
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 compared to other regions which are averagely equivalent in percentages
due to
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 some regions being indirectly proportional to the two charts. In short North
America
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 wins the race in the two categories as a summarised value compared to others in two pie charts.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, timber with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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