Describe your pet or your favorite animal. Write about 150 words.

It is quite common these days for people to adopt many kinds of different animals as pets. I would like to talk about my

favorite

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animal that I

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grew as a pet, which is a cat. The cat's name is

Cream

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and I have had it for eight years already. It has been gifted to me by my parents since I asked for one when I was younger. I loved the cat instantly since it was so tiny and had fluffy

beige-colored

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fur. Whenever I felt stressed about school, I would pet

Cream

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's soft fur and relax. Every time I do so,

Cream

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would stay close to me and purr quietly. I used to spend most of the day with him so we became really close. I bathed him regularly so he smelled really nice. I love

Cream

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a lot but since I have to go to university in another province, I have to leave him back home with my parents.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

162 words

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Describe your pet or your favorite animal. Write about 150 words.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tools. others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of videogames outweigh the benefits?

Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are theadvantages and disadvantages for the child having a large number of toys?

Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.