SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT CHILDREN SHOULD ONLY READ ACADEMIC BOOKS. OTHERS BELIEVE THAT READING BOOKS FOR PLEASURE IS EQUALLY IMPORTANT. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

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people are arguing about whether
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should only read academic
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or not.
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is paramount important I believe that reading other
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for pleasure is equally important. Regarding the benefits of reading
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for academic purposes, the most significant one is that young people are able to focus on learning the knowledge
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related to their school assessments and examinations by studying academic
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. Academic
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usually show important and useful information and let people learn in an organized and quick way.
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, in order to learn a foreign
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like English starting from zero, most of us will choose to learn grammar and vocabulary through reading academic
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as the information printed in academic
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is usually more accurate and printed in a systematic way. There is no doubt that
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are able to learn new and accurate knowledge from the
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that are prepared by the schools effectively and the
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favour them to handle the current exam-orientated educational system.
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, never should we overlook the importance of reading
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for pleasure. Despite reading academic
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, reading different
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bring a multitude of positive effects on
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. Take learning a foreign
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as an example,
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could
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learn it from reading others
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as novels and fiction which are written in a foreign
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. Novels and fictions are usually more interesting as they include fascinating storylines
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academic
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are usually boring. If
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could only read academic
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in learning a new foreign
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, they would easily lose their interest and motivation in learning. Allowing
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to pick different kinds of
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to read can maintain their motivation in learning in long term.
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,
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's development should be all-rounded
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of focusing on the academic aspects only. Reading various
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allows them to learn and grow in different aspects.
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, when some
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are stressed from schoolwork, reading
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like " The chicken soup for the soul" can inspire them and bring them some positive energy which is good for their mental health. They are able to learn to face difficulties in life with a positive attitude. Under
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important, I still believe that students should read other
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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