In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centre or malls to do their shopping Is this a positive or a negative development?
Many small
shops
Use synonyms
closed
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are closed
now a days
because customers are travel to large shopping Correct the word
nowadays
centers
or malls for shopping. There Change the spelling
centres
is
good and bad reasons.
Change the verb form
are
In
Change preposition
On
one
hand ,Correct article usage
the one
peoples
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people
they
are earning Correct pronoun usage
apply
money
and they are buying Use synonyms
the
quality Correct article usage
apply
things
. They are not thinking about to expense the Use synonyms
money
. Use synonyms
Mostly
Correct your spelling
Most
people
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they
are going to Correct pronoun usage
apply
Large
shopping Correct article usage
a Large
centre
because our time will reduce Fix the agreement mistake
centres
for
Change preposition
apply
the
shopping. We can buy all Correct article usage
apply
things
from the shopping mall. No need to go Use synonyms
for
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to
the
separate Correct article usage
apply
shops
. Use synonyms
Example
lulu shopping mall is Change preposition
For example
biggest
shopping area. Once We go for buying Add an article
a biggest
the biggest
things
we can purchase all Use synonyms
things
. our time will spend less.Use synonyms
people
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not
think about the Add a missing verb
do not
money
they are working , earning and spending Use synonyms
money
. Use synonyms
Weekends
they are going for Change preposition
At weekends
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an outing
outing
with families and different types of cuisine they are trying. Fix the agreement mistake
outings
People
enjoyed large places and whatever they want to Use synonyms
buying
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buy
things
. Use synonyms
Person
they can save Add an article
The person
money
to buy from the local Use synonyms
shops
.
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In
Change preposition
On
other
Correct article usage
the other
hands
, Some Fix the agreement mistake
hand
people
's like Use synonyms
middle class
Add a hyphen
middle-class
family
mostly Fix the agreement mistake
families
choosing
Wrong verb form
choose
the
local Correct article usage
apply
shops
,because they Use synonyms
are prefer
to check the cheap rates Change the verb form
prefer
items
. There is Change preposition
of items
negative
side Correct article usage
a negative
for
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to
this
. Sometimes we've to get Linking Words
a low quality
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low quality things
a low quality thing
things
. But Use synonyms
Change preposition
in there
there
situation they prefer to choose that. Mostly Replace the word
their
house wife
use to buy from the local Correct your spelling
housewife
shops
. Before very past time Use synonyms
people
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was
ònly using the local Change the verb form
were
shops
. Now working Use synonyms
people
mostly prefer to go Use synonyms
for
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apply
the
shopping in large places. Perhaps local Correct article usage
apply
people
mostly Use synonyms
to
go purchasing from Fix the infinitive
apply
the
small Correct article usage
apply
shops
. Before local Use synonyms
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shops
we can buy Add a comma
,shops
things
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with
cheap prices. But now they Change preposition
at
are
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have also increased
also
increased Linking Words
there
prices because of the living cost.
In Correct your spelling
their
conclude
,Replace the word
conclusion
in
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apply
shopping
Add an article
a shopping
the shopping
mall
and local Fix the agreement mistake
malls
shops
Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
having
Change the form of the verb
have
the
positive and negative development. Local Correct article usage
apply
shops
Use synonyms
they
increase their prices because of the living expenses. So Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
mostly insisted to go for the large shopping centre.Use synonyms
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