The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
The graph gives
the
information about how many Correct article usage
apply
people
visited a Carribean
Correct your spelling
Caribbean
island
for their holiday between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number of total visitors
of
the Change preposition
to
island
were
gradually increased in the given period of time. Unnecessary verb
apply
Also
, the people
who visited Correct quantifier usage
number of people
a
Change the article
an
island
with
Change preposition
on
cruise
Correct article usage
a cruise
ship
tour
drastically rose.
In 2010, tourists who stayed on Fix the agreement mistake
tours
island
Add an article
the island
were
0.5 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
, and a year later remained same
. Correct article usage
the same
On the contrary
, cruise
ship
tourists were
slightly doubled, 0.25 to 0.5 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
in the same timeframe. Next,
between 2011 and 2013, tourists enjoyed
their vacation on Wrong verb form
enjoying
island
increased Add an article
the island
about
0.5 Change preposition
by about
million
to 1.5 million
and there were no further
number
Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
changed
from 2013 to 2015. Replace the word
changes
However
, in case
of Correct article usage
the case
cruise
ship
visitors
there was slightly
dropped in 1 year Correct article usage
a slightly
during
2011 and 2012, the figures were 0.5 Change preposition
between
million
to almost 0.25 million
. But after 2012, more people
enjoyed their holiday with cruise
ships, it ended up to 1.25 million
in 2015.
From 2015 to 2017, visitors
stayed
on Wrong verb form
staying
island
started to drop but Add an article
the island
slighlty
increased again in 2017, Correct your spelling
slightly
about
1.25 Change preposition
from about
million
to 1.5 million
. Cruise
ship
visitors
, in contrast
, continuously increased and 2 million
people
booked cruise
trip
in 2017.Fix the agreement mistake
trips
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, island, visitors, cruise, ship, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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