The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
The graph gives
the
information about how many Correct article usage
apply
people
visited a Use synonyms
Carribean
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Caribbean
island
for their holiday between 2010 and 2017.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the number of total Linking Words
visitors
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of
the Change preposition
to
island
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were
gradually increased in the given period of time. Unnecessary verb
apply
Also
, the Linking Words
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people
who visited Correct quantifier usage
number of people
a
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an
island
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with
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on
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cruise
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a cruise
ship
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tour
drastically rose.
In 2010, tourists who stayed on Fix the agreement mistake
tours
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island
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the island
were
0.5 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
, and a year later remained Use synonyms
same
. Correct article usage
the same
On the contrary
, Linking Words
cruise
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ship
tourists Use synonyms
were
slightly doubled, 0.25 to 0.5 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
in the same timeframe. Use synonyms
Next,
between 2011 and 2013, tourists Linking Words
enjoyed
their vacation on Wrong verb form
enjoying
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island
increased Add an article
the island
about
0.5 Change preposition
by about
million
to 1.5 Use synonyms
million
and there were no Use synonyms
further
Linking Words
number
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numbers
changed
from 2013 to 2015. Replace the word
changes
However
, in Linking Words
case
of Correct article usage
the case
cruise
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ship
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visitors
there was Use synonyms
slightly
dropped in 1 year Correct article usage
a slightly
during
2011 and 2012, the figures were 0.5 Change preposition
between
million
to almost 0.25 Use synonyms
million
. But after 2012, more Use synonyms
people
enjoyed their holiday with Use synonyms
cruise
ships, it ended up to 1.25 Use synonyms
million
in 2015.
From 2015 to 2017, Use synonyms
visitors
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stayed
on Wrong verb form
staying
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island
started to drop but Add an article
the island
slighlty
increased again in 2017, Correct your spelling
slightly
about
1.25 Change preposition
from about
million
to 1.5 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
Cruise
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ship
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visitors
, Use synonyms
in contrast
, continuously increased and 2 Linking Words
million
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people
booked Use synonyms
cruise
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trip
in 2017.Fix the agreement mistake
trips
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, island, visitors, cruise, ship, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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