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Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history .Discuss your opinion and both the view points

#people #history #waste #time #points
It has been suggested that
studing hisory
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studying history
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wate
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waste
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However
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its
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it
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 can be
fundmental
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fundamental
 for culture to
be remained
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remain
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. I support
this
 idea strongly because
history
part
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is part
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 of all
countries
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country's
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culture
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cultures
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.
This
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analyze
analyse
analays
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analyse
 the
history
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necessary
necessery
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necessary
 to study , and why
its
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 can be not In the vast majority of cases,
history
have
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 been considered
on
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 of the main part of
culture
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the culture
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, because
its
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it
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 can revive
thr
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the
hirtage
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heritage
.
For example
, if the
students
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student's
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 study
history
 they
wil
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will
 be more
knowladgeble
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knowledgeable
 about their country and the action
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that have
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have
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has
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been
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happend
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happened
,
consequently
, they
wil
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will
 be able to tell their future children about it,
as a
result
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 the future
genration
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generation
generations
 will know about their
country
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heratige
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heritage
.
Furtheremore
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Furthermore
,
students
 can have more gob
opputrtonities beacuse
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opportunities because
 of
studing
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studying
history
.
For instance
 , many jobs sectors
reqaired
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require
 some
emplyee
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employee
employees
 who
know
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knows
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 about
history
 like
historic
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a historic
the historic
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 teacher.
On the other hand
,
history
 can waste the
student
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 time ,
beacause
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because
, its have been
belived
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believed
the
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 other subjects are more important for
the
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apply
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students
 like maths and chemistry to
improver
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students
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students'
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 brain and
creat
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create
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a genration
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genration
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generation
can
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that can
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 handle complex jobs like
:
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apply
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 doctors and
engeenering
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engineering
. In conclusion, I
belive
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believe
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student
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students
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 should study
this
 subject to
rais
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raise
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great
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a great
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 generation.
However
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students
 are not
intrested
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interested
 in
this
 subject.
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