Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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some

people

that to inhibit

crime

, more

regulations

can be done,

while

others assert that a few can be arranged. To reduce

crime

rates, new additional

law

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laws

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may be legislated and

imprisonment

spans may be extended. Looking from the other side of the discussion, punishment situations are looking fair.

May be

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fines can be enhanced. On the one hand, to the criminal behaviour among

people

new

actions

and

regulations

should be done. Enforcement and deterrence may be insufficient

on

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many

cases

. Thereby,

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of

Laws

can take

responsibilities

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to renovate some fines and

imprisonment

spans. To illustrate that torturing and racist

actions

have been still growing in Western countries and it means that these

cases

have not been penalized sufficiently.

In addition

, digital

crimes

have

been

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doubled in recent years and it means that

regulations

about these

cases

have been inadequate

to

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deterrence.

Thus

,

actions

can be increased in order to halt

crime

.

On the other hand

, in some

cases

and countries,

crime

rates may be looking low and

laws

may be adequate for

the

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society. Those

people

who live there think that

imprisonment

and fines for criminal activities are fair for both victims and prisoners. Trivial and little

crimes

continue to happen in these areas,

hence

people

may claim few arrangements about the

laws

.

For instance

, traffic

crimes

and

reaching

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of private information can be counted as little

crimes

and these

cases

may need some

regulations

in terms of

laws

.

Therefore

, these

people

do not demand comprehensive

regulations

because they rarely suffer from criminal affairs. In conclusion,

cases

and examples can be multiplied with

this

suggestion.

Although

,

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some

people

do not need new

regulations

in their law systems, in my opinion, new

actions

should be taken in terms of

imprisonment

,

fine

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fines

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and definition of some new

crimes

because these

cases

would happen everywhere in the future.