The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton Park and plans for proposed changes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant.

The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton Park and plans for proposed changes.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant.
The maps
illustrates
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illustrate
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the
plan
of Peyton
Park
now and the suggested improvement for Peyton
park
in the future.
Overall
, most features of the
park
don’t change in terms of size, but their position will be changed
according to
the future garden
plan
. As shown in the current
plan
, the
lake
was at the
center
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centre
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of the
park
.
Also
,
tennis
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the tennis
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court could be seen on the west
side
of the
lake
and not far from it,
picnic
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a picnic
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area can be spotted. The picnic area
sit
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sits
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on the north
side
of the
lake
.
While
, the parking lot which was slightly larger than the size of the
lake
, was on the south of the
lake
. Meanwhile, the proposed
plan
shows that a playground will be added
on
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apply
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the
Correct article usage
apply
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northwest of the
lake
. The picnic area will be on the east
side
of the playground and close to the north
side
of the tennis court. The tennis court will be moved to the east of the
lake
. A little bit to the west, a swimming dock will be added and directed to the
lake
. The parking lot will remain as is.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagrams
  • current map
  • proposed changes
  • summarize
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
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