Some people saay that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so commin that we no linger pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Advertisement is
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one of the extremely successful marketing strategies to pursue a lot of consumers. Change the article
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On the other hand
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no longer pay attention to it.
From my point of view, I totally believe that every advertising completely attracts many customers by their own advantages. Unnecessary verb
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as, influencing a campaign about black-live matters or LGBTQ plus. Linking Words
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On the contrary
, others argue that advertising can give various drawbacks. Recently there are still Linking Words
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as sexual harassment or bullying both indirect and direct ways as the advertisement refers to sexual matters without any warning to whether children or those who are under eighteen years old. Linking Words
Besides
, a bunch of consumers misunderstood over-sell products that try to avoid the facts. Linking Words
For instance
, a skincare advertisement claimed that acne will perfectly disappear for a week but the medical ,treatment there Linking Words
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still does not exist.
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To conclude
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gain both benefits and disadvantages from advertising. Use synonyms
However
, the useful solution that can prevent causes and effects from the Linking Words
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is having awareness which means customers should consider before deciding to purchase things. Use synonyms
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an entrepreneur must have sincerity with clients.Linking Words
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